Lady I say,
I don't love you,
But for the charm in you,
I say I don't love you,
But for the smiles of you;
Nothing in your eyes,
But the beauty of thy soul,
Nothing in thy face,
But the reflection of thy soul;
Lady I say,
I don't love you,
But for beauty of thy soul,
I say I don't love you,
But for the serenity of thy soul.
Nothing in my love,
Material for you,
Nothing in my heart,
But the pure love for you;
Lady I say,
I don't love you,
But for my heart loves you,
I say I don't love you,
But for my soul needs you.
*~*Aun Ali*~*
{Lead by Example}
Author notes
My Name: Yours Truely, Aun Ali
Category 2: I Don't Love You~My Chemical Romance
A contest entry
- Music And Lyrics by Georgia La Mariposa.
300 points, ended May 29, 2008, 1 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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COMMENDABLE WORK
highly commendable !!!
A stunning feeling I got after reading this .... Very beautiful .... I dont use this word much but Since You deserve it I say it : FLAWLESS !!!
You have Great potential !!!
You DESERVE the GOLD !!!
you ought to be in my favourites list for this work of yours !! -
I'd say you did quite well with this love ballad!
Flows nicely ,smooth and well thought out.
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This is very nice Aun Ali
I really enjoyed reading it!
Since when do you write love lyrics or love poetry?? or is this just an inspiration with nothing personal??
CONGRATULATIONS ON THE GOLD TROPHY!!
Well done, keep on writing,
Nooni
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Thanks for this entry it's a great take on the prompt, it it supposed to go with the tue of I Don't Love You? It's one of my favourite songs
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Actually I don't listen to much of the music, but when I saw the contest with no entry as yet, I thought to give a start to encourage you and all the other prospected contestants. Thanks for the comment though.
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