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Beauty Blossoms

Fluttering rain
  of flower petals
kissing shining smiles
in the endless
meadows of a soul
    in bloom

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Prompt was the picture

Picture credit:
http://psychosomaticc.deviantart.com/art/Back-To-Childhood-86220577-

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  • carole21
    May 21, 2008

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    nice

    nice descriptive write for the prompt . . liked "Fluttering rain of flower petals" and "meadows of a soul in bloom" . . well done


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    May 21, 2008

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    wow this was really good..... nice job here... thanks for sharing with us and good luck in contest....


  • checkmate
    May 21, 2008

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    simply beautiful. I love this piece~ so well written and painted in such beauty. exactly what I wanted
    thank you so much for entering.

    best lucks,
    checkmate.