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The Care-Free Ride

I know I'm old as dirt;
my body parts hurt,
but, when in this swing -I dance.

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  • checkmate
    May 21, 2008

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    beautifully written. creative take on the prompt. thank you for entering.

    best lucks,
    checkmate.


  • individuality gold member
    May 21, 2008

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    a good smiling piece of poetry penned here , as old as dirt lol but as fresh as rain on a warm summer's night.


    • 2lullabyhaven
      May 21, 2008
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      hahaha yes, those swing rides stick to the mind, and constantly beckons hahahaha