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crystalline dreams

in pink crystalline dreams
she paints fantasies

as poigant pasts
rekindle her soul
making her love again

A contest entry

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  • Beauty Of Silence
    May 23, 2008

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    ooh wow! i think this was absolutely beautiful! very very sweet... and it painted such a gorgeous picture in mind gal... keep wrockin and good luck in charu's contest gal!!!

    ~ranji


  • checkmate
    May 21, 2008

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    a beautiful write. well expressed. thank you for entering.

    best lucks,
    checkmate.