Smile beautiful darling,
for his laughter will echo
long after he leaves.
Ghosts of his lusting fingers,
will stain your tainted skin,
you will yearn for the heat he brought
Author notes
Echoo (echo echo echo)
enjoy =]
A contest entry
- PIF - Word Prompt by Dalaney.
775 points, ended May 31, 2008, 15 entries
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Comments
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laughter has that loud quick edge that persserves so well
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