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Bound in cycle

When I look at the world   
A pattern is observed.
We, most of the time, get involved in matters
Without knowing where we are leading to.
Any journey should have a destination.
Do we really think what our goal is?
What is the purpose of life?
Very few of us really do.
So we are bound by the cycle of life and death.

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    June 5, 2008

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    This is a beautiful poem... very thought-provoking and an interesting read... I like the questioning tone and the acceptance (almost of defeat) at the end thank you for your entry

    Keep writing

    Polly


  • DolphinLass silver member
    June 3, 2008
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    very true words well written, good luck