He wraps her
in blue velvet skies
with just a glance
of gentleman's tenderness
Clouds parting
his smile
addresses her painful
scars
one minute
at a time
Mingled tears...
Author notes
Life
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie; Picture Prompt/10 entries by perfectsunset.
300 points, ended May 28, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Congrats Baby!
You took Bronze! I am so proud of you!!! This truly is a beautiful write. -
The beauty of this picture you have captured with your words and gorgeous imagery. Loved the atmosphere in this as you have set the mood, passionately and emotionally. Loved the idea of "mingled tears" with the ending. Perfect ending.
Thanks for entering & best of luck
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Beautiful
I love the use of the imagery, how your words bring forth emotion, his love & care. I immediately pictured the surreal images of the blue velvet skies and the clouds parting...Very well done.
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