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Emotional Ecstasy

Missing image

 Bodies tangeled together.

sensations come,

 in small waves.

 Flirting hands move me

 to slightest touch.



I am ensnared

in burning aching appetite.

 Brought to emotional ecstasy

 by determined thoughts.



Weakened by love's grasp

 pulling me down upon hard flesh.

  Stay inside me

 warmth pulsating softly.



Your fingers brushing

hair from my face.

To taste my candied lips.

 

 Whispering... love me.

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For my lover,my friend,my lifetime

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  • michellemybelle gold member
    October 6
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    Just wonderful. A perfect blend of passion, love and tenderness, which is what makes sensuality beautiful. Congrats on your well deserved trophies. Also, I love this pic!
    love and
    Michelle


  • Poetryintheblood
    September 21

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    Thank you for your most beautifully sensual write, good luck in my contest, Josie
  • VeritasLiberte
    July 28

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    All I can say is, your husband is a BLESSED man to have such a wife as you! Never let the "fire" go out! Rekindle that "spark" of God's love towards each other DAILY! Lovely write Lisa!

  • ian sawicki silver member
    June 3

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    a good piece of sensuality wrapped up in poetry's pleasant performance, let love languish in the heart of beauty's breath.


  • Manoj Sanyal
    May 24
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    Thanks for participation.
    good luck

  • Lowercase Prelude gold member
    May 22

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    well penned sensuality. this erotica really had a "personal" feel to it, the way you wrote it, as if to capture the reader and bring them into the room. well done.


  • Xianaria gold member
    May 21

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    Beautiful

    With words carefully chosen, you have frozen in time a moment of pure bliss. No vulgarities nor crude descriptions, you have excited my senses without being blatant.

    Very well written, I have enjoyed every line. I wish you well in this contest!
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