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Emotional Ecstasy

Missing image

 Bodies tangeled together.

sensations come,

 in small waves.

 Flirting hands move me

 to slightest touch.



I am ensnared

in burning aching appetite.

 Brought to emotional ecstasy

 by determined thoughts.



Weakened by love's grasp

 pulling me down upon hard flesh.

  Stay inside me

 warmth pulsating softly.



Your fingers brushing

hair from my face.

To taste my candied lips.

 

 Whispering... love me.

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  • John BoSox
    September 26

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    Congrats on your trophy .This is extremely sensual..Wonderful imagery..I can feel your emotions,,..and desire..You accomplish this with gracious taste and a splash of talent..Take a bow...so nice..I loved it

    John


  • sgking123 gold member
    September 4

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    beautiful lines

    thiswas indeed well done ..I oved the flw and the warmth,,,you began with and the ended with........stay inside...wow..that was so cool


  • mgmc gold member
    August 25

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    This is very sensual but doesn't cross over to erotic. Seems difficult to write.
    Your poem is very well written!


  • Eric Marsh
    August 23
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    a wonderful well written poem..passionate and sensual , but not erotic..a difficult thing to do..well done ...eric


  • SteveS gold member
    August 15

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    Oooh...need an ice bath. First, that picture is a handful. Beyond that...so vivid...redirect to ice bath.

  • Bob Fox
    August 4

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    see

    This is what I mean. redheads have a certain way. and damn it can be wonderful & painful. Hot write poet.


    • Soft-Rain gold member
      August 4
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      had to laugh Bob at that comment...
      Thank you i think lol

  • Liquid memories
    February 22
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    Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

    very sweet.


  • theburninglegend silver member
    December 11, 2008
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    ummmmmm

    um, what is there to say? I think all words of gratitude and encouragement have been spoken and I do not think that there is any other words that could express or give words of encouragement to thee. Great Job is all I can say, and well penned, appealing and pleasing, and the picture ignites some heat that is....leave it at that. lol


  • michellemybelle gold member
    October 6, 2008

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    Just wonderful. A perfect blend of passion, love and tenderness, which is what makes sensuality beautiful. Congrats on your well deserved trophies. Also, I love this pic!
    love and
    Michelle

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    September 21, 2008

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    Thank you for your most beautifully sensual write, good luck in my contest, Josie

  • VeritasLiberte
    July 28, 2008

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    All I can say is, your husband is a BLESSED man to have such a wife as you! Never let the "fire" go out! Rekindle that "spark" of God's love towards each other DAILY! Lovely write Lisa!


  • individuality gold member
    June 3, 2008

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    a good piece of sensuality wrapped up in poetry's pleasant performance, let love languish in the heart of beauty's breath.


  • Manoj Sanyal
    May 24, 2008
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    Thanks for participation.
    good luck


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    May 22, 2008

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    well penned sensuality. this erotica really had a "personal" feel to it, the way you wrote it, as if to capture the reader and bring them into the room. well done.


  • Xianaria gold member
    May 21, 2008

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    Beautiful

    With words carefully chosen, you have frozen in time a moment of pure bliss. No vulgarities nor crude descriptions, you have excited my senses without being blatant.

    Very well written, I have enjoyed every line. I wish you well in this contest!

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