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Passion merges Pattern Passion surges urging Patent Pattern's splurges

The two-note chords form a Mobius strip, whose boundary is a 'trefoil knot'

Beyond the mind's horizon patterns beckon,

role-reversing whirlpool self-absorption,

encouraging vast vistas poets reckon

essential. Seamless packets speed, proportion

with image merges to discard distortion,  

inspiring outlook centuries may check on.

Coherency's discovered as heart's portion

contributes to crystal verse some spec on,

some critics peck, sense different apportion. 

 

 

Author notes

"If your work of art is good, if it is true, it will find its echo"
"The art of writing is the art of discovering what you believe." Gustave Flaubert (1821-1880)


"Il faut effacer le reflet de la personnalité pour que l'inspiration bondisse à tout jamais du miroir. Laissez les influences jouer librement, inventez ce qui a déjà été inventé, ce qui est hors de doute, ce qui est incroyable, donnez à la spontanéité sa valeur pure. Soyez celui à qui l'on parle et qui est entendu. Une seule vision, variée à l'infini. Le poète est celui qui inspire bien plus que celui qui est inspiré. Paul Eluard 1895-1952 Ralentir travaux, 1930


The poet's personality should evaporate, empowering inspiration's rebound from life's mirror ad aeternam. Give diverse influences free reign, invent that which has already been invented, which is as much certitude as incredibility, while according spontaneity peerless and pure priority. Be someone to whom one speaks and who is heard. One unique overview perspective, with infinite variations on a theme. The poet should inspire significantly more than being inspired (trans. JR) http://lapoesiequejaime.net/peluard.htm



Visualisation of music http://www.physorg.com/news127659537.html

and pic :

http://www.telegraph.co.uk/earth/main.jhtml?view=DETAILS&grid=&xml=/earth/2008/04/17/scimusic117.xml



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  • marlene47 silver member
    May 24

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    I like beckoning patterns, self-absorbing whirlpool, poet's vistas, merging proportion and heart contributing to crystal verse.
    Very clever entry. Enjoyed all your notes also!
    Thank you for sharing in this contest.
    Marlene
  • Trafalger679Curious silver member
    May 22

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    Superb

    Your title is almost a tongue-twister. 'Tis rather humorous. A very good write, indeed. Thanks for sharing this one.