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Gypsy Girl

Have you noticed
The storm clouds gather,
My Gypsy girl?
They're darkening the sky.

How far from home are you tonight,
My Deer heart,
Are you safe from harm?

And can you see,
My Gypsy Queen,
How I miss your Gypsy eyes?

Can the stars shine
through the clouds for you,
Little Gypsy Girl.

And can you see,
My Gypsy Queen,
How I miss your Gypsy smile?

What distant lands
Have you passed through,
On your way to where you've been,
My Gypsy Deer?

Gypsy,
Gypsy,
Wandering magic,
Can you make it back
I'll help you make it back.

Gypsy Deer,
with face paint tears,
How many years have passed?
My Gypsy Deer
How long will our fear last?

And can you see,
My Gypsy Queen,
How I miss your Gypsy eyes?

And can you see,
My Gypsy Queen,
How I miss your Gypsy smile?

My Gypsy Girl with
Gypsy Eyes,
Gypsy Smile,
Gypsy Mind,
What do you leave behind this time?






Author notes

Not my best work, but it feels good to be writing again.
I really needed to get this done, even if its not quite right. it is what i needed it to be for the most part.

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  • recky
    June 24, 2008
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    Thank you. this poem means the world to me. I miss you alot. Dont worry I will never leave for good


  • BittersweetMercy
    May 23, 2008
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    Nice work..
    I'm guessing it's for Kyra..

    ~Kinsey


  • Lord Darius Avalion
    May 22, 2008
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    I like it. I think I can even guess who its for.
    Seriously good works.

  • Sam-a-nantha
    May 21, 2008

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    Well, I absolutely love it. I could totally hear it as a song with John Denver singing or something. I'm thinkin' it might inspire me...

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