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Blind

The grey skies show stark

illusions of color, and

your fake and lost sin







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  • ears2hearyou gold member
    May 21, 2008

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    Applaud-Applaud-Applaud

    ewww..that last line really dug in...well done,
    it makes you stop and reflect upon the line boldly.
    so many ways we will all ponder on this one!
    well done! well done!
    love the discipline of our haiku writers!
    ears/Seattle