Shall we dance
Into the whelm
Of imagination
Sight unseen
Shall you rest
Your hand in mine
As we escape
On this restless breeze
Tender tiptoes
Across the sands
Of time and life
In future and present
Bind me in
Your arms tonight
And allow me
A taste of heaven
Author notes
LuminousKiss
A contest entry
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Comments
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I find this very beautiful in its simplicity.
This is very sweet and quietly sensual. To be able to escape into heaven in the arms of someone we love would be delightful. Tiptoeing across the sands of time and life what a picture that conveys. Nice poem I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest.
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This was so beautiful and softly sensual..
The imagery was very vivid and wonderfully romantic..
you did a wonderful job..
Thank you very much for sharing,
Best of luck..
Angel
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Wow, this is over whelming lol thanks so much for your entry and good luck lol
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What a beautiful and tender expression of feelings. The form and flow are as delicate as the beautiful words you've penned... Well done.
Ken
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This was a very magical and wonderful piece. I love the imagery you created and the eveness of your sentencing. Best of luck my dear competitor
Carrie
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