He loves me..
He loves me not..
He loves me..
He loves me not..
God, Im so confused.
He likes me..
But he says that he's F
A
L
L
I
N
G
for.. her.
Because we are so far a part
can we
make this
work...?
Can we
really be...?
Fights eruppt
Spitting words...
Tears escape
for the first time.
He loves me..
He loves me not..
He loves me..
He loves me not..
What am i
supposed
to
do?
He loves me..
Please.. dont make me like you.
He loves me not..
It'll only be harder
when you chose her.
He loves me..
I love him..
He choses her.
He loves me not.
Please tell me what you think
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Wow, this is deeply emotional, and I love the format! It just adds to the poem. You really did a great job on this one. I luv it!
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Thank you
your comment means alot >.<
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This reminds me...
This reminds me of a good friend. Its a good poem, if should I say so myself. I like how you put so much into so little words. Good job.
-iammyownself
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thanks
-Rayne
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You pour so much emotion into your works, I dare to take a venture and ask you if something such as this happened to you. If so it is a shame. Some body that can write such pieces is obviously an immaculate person and to pass up someone like such is a bad move on his part. Although it upsets me that you have not written another in over a month. Keep writing!!!
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thanks X]
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wow very deep and kinda hard to read haahah i likes its alot i like the set up to it puts the poem into the 'mood'
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^.^ Thank you.. again lol =D
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wow
effin' great... the "falling" part (my favorite in the uni-verse) was gimicky and awesome... i loves it. GB -
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^.^ Thank you~* <3
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This is such a great write, seriously! I love this poem and it holds so much talent.
The punctuation is definitely interesting, too.
You have no idea how much I can relate to this and it seriously sucks.
He loves me, and i love him back, but no...it doesn't work out the way it should ~ he choses her
<3 broken hearts rock, right? lol
I loved this because I could just look at it and know that I'm not the only one who went through something like that, ya know?
But what can a person do...
You did great.
Kudos.
Sincerely,
dovey ~
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Thank you so much!
it really means alot
Yesh, broken hearts are soooo great, lol ^.^
Thanksb again <3
-Rayne
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GREAT!!!
Wow im glad i read this.
Amazing write Rayne
True talent
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wow this is reallly beutiful... i love it.. and boys can be very confusing
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thanks XD
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I know this feeling well! (hence my Aiden and Angel..drama..) lol. Waiting is worth it. I see that "darkromantic113" was kind of the basis for this poem. And what he says is correct. Wait. Have patience. for in the end, things will work out. Don't push them, don't forece them, but see where time leads you!!! look at me, I got my man Aiden!
Great write!!
Mylee
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Lol yeah he told me about that.. But i dont think i can wait forever, lol..
well anyway.. thanks =]
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I like you, but please don't be so quick to close me off. Have you ever seen Grey's Anatomy? Derek loved Meredith, whom he just met, but his unfaithful wife showed up. It took time for him to finalize a divorce.
These things take time. Do you believe in finishing what you started before moving onto the next thing?
So wait for me. See where time takes us and what opportunities open up because I didn't choose anyone yet.
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