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Life Cycle

Birth
Innocence
Laughter
Puberty
Education
Reality
Career
Love
Marriage
Partnership
Children
Responsible
Accountable
Tears
Death

 

 

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15 words

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    May 21, 2008
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    I believe I understand the cycle you are writing but this reads more like a list to me.


  • sweetgirlwa
    May 21, 2008
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    Perfectly captured, the cycle of life in 15 simple yet effective words. Great work, good luck


  • Sagerider
    May 21, 2008
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    Very good

    But it is all the things that go with those words that make the trip worthwhile.