(FUN: I wrote this
when I was 16 years old:
a poem for puppy lovers)
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Your name comes to me
like a far away song
my Love ... Beloved ... my Love
Your name speaks to me
of a love gone so long
gone like a lost melody
I reach out to you
to grasp but my pain
my Love ... Beloved ... my Love
I cry out to you
all my yearning in vain
our music an ended song
myra
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Author notes
I did not really know what I was writing LOL; actually, I wrote this piece about paper love: my first love, kissed only twice by him (one kiss in an elevator going to the 15th floor!), moved away and left me with all these new feelings!
Written February 17th, 2002
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i love it
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I love this. Puppy love has to be the best feeling in the world. This is great. Very Cute.
~*Misty*~
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gecko LOL luckily mine was about love ... lost (puppy) love, but still ...! Thanks for reading ...
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Thanks, scilentspeeker3, for reading ... and dreaming ...
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it tis a lovely piece Myra
(remembering when i was 16 every thing I wrote was death and destruction.ouch)
thankyou for sharing this -
Ya Gotta love it....*looks off into space as a NAME pops into head,::Grin:: spreads accross face*
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Ohhh...of course...
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lol..either time or place...seems all good :)
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Thanks gozling ... you are addressing a Myra from another time and place ...
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Thanks Singer! Actually I did compose some music on it ... mind joining the song?
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LOL aiwaz ... I experienced almost the same feeling when this little piece of faded paper fell out of a compilement of poems! It is a long, long time ago ...
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Gentle and softly this reads beautifully
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Hmmm...love it...
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this one came to me like a puppy licking my face
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