Bunny Rabbits and Rabid Dogs
Two things in the same
Hand in hand, like Prince and Frog
And a Savior and his Dame!
Crime and Sin as Prayer it lies
Reflections on their own
Like my melancholy butterflies
Pressure applied and shown
Chemistry is Punishment
For love is lost for most
And lies are told in all respect
To those you find so close
A plethora of happy things
Happy, sad and true
Extrodinary awful beings
One that looks like you
All the same we find each one
When we're looking at another
Both criminal and cop will run
And look just like the other
So who are we to judge someone
When I, myself, submit
I am human, I come undone
I lie and I admit
Author notes
It's weird I wanted to join but don't have lots of time [[End of school year lol ewwwwww]] it starts goofy and mellows into kinda seriousness!
I'm lame i know
I'm a Gaayngster.....
~Memo! [[said-mee-mo]]
A contest entry
- Options Ten by Partners In Crime.
900 points, ended May 26, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Hoo-yah!
Now break out with some beat-boxing to go with this, and you've got a record! ;D
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awesome...it made me giggle....bunnies and rabid dogs are the same.... O.O
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Great Poem
I think you did an outstanding job with the rhyming in the poem. I think rhyming is hard to do so I give you credit.
I LOVE YOU TO KT -
I like this poem a lot, it has a sing song ring to it
im a big fan of rhyming Good luck in the contest
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Thanks for your entry
confusing, two sides of the same coin so to speak.
God Bless
Tammy -
An interesting poem. The rhyming is very good, the flow, too. And between the lines is a subtle message to reflect upon. Another good piece, Katie and I wish you well in the contest
Dee
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The rhyming in this poem is perfect it just flowed nicely. Great read
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