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Thank You For Being You

 

 

 

 

 

On the day that you were born,

the stars shone brighter than ever.

 

All of the angels in Heaven above,

gathered together in a circle of love.

 

From a little statue that God had created,

they breathed into you life and celebrated.

 

They blessed your life with good fortune and humility,

and unto your heart brought endless tranquility.

 

Then picked you up and carried you high,

and with their help touched every star in the sky.

 

You are truly a blessing to everyone you know,

and just being in your presence inspires us to grow.

 

You will always be remembered for all that you do.

But most of all my young friend, for just being you.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Prompt: Botticelli's Madonna of the Magnificat
15 Lines or less

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Comments


  • Valley Girl silver member
    June 27, 2008
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    A beautiful dedication
    Lovely J!
    Congrats on the HM!


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    May 21, 2008
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    Lovely serene piece, loved it. Hugs, Bunny


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    May 20, 2008

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    This is a awesome piece my dear as always.
    Great job and best wishes to you in the contest.

    Love
    Passions