Memories,
like the colors
of another world,
like the pieces
of a puzzle
left undone,
like you
...in the
Summer sun,
Remember then,
way back when,
When love
was so easy
for you,
all you
had to do,
was find
someone who cared,
who would share,
in your memories.
rememeber when,
way back then...
When memories
were not the
colors of
another world,
nor the pieces
of a puzzle
left undone,
for I had you
in the Summer sun!
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A contest entry
- " Memories" by wingsofgold25.
500 points, ended May 29, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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This is realy a well written poem.
I loved the nostalgia of way back when.
Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest. -
"for I had you
in the Summer sun!"
My mind drifts to a dream where an adoring eye might say that to me. I had you in the summer sun...let me close my eyes and run with that thought. Lovely...alby
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