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Exhaled

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We chat'd 'bout gardens
Ivory gazbo's holding secrets.
Romping across the grass
under light of silvery moon;
I fell in love thee.
Thus sitting by the pond holding
hands I nearly swooned.
Twas thy frenchy kiss, doth
m'soul harm not.
Sprouting angelic wings
m'heart took flight.
Tender thy touch; sublime
thee prove to be.
'Tis our midnight sun
brought m'sense back to me.
In hast thy lips sent chills
less ye be compromised.
I bid thee farewell,
with thee m'heart
exhaled; under

natures full moon.


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...making love outside under the full moon.

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  • Pearl-1
    May 26, 2008
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    very romantic novy..good luck in the contest..xxx


  • Margaret Denham gold member
    May 21, 2008

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    There was a wonderful old world feeling of forbidden romance in your words that left me wondering what would happen to the lovers next.

    Best of luck in the contest.

    Margaret


  • Brazos silver member
    May 20, 2008

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    Wonderfully descriptive verse, excellent imagery, made the Moon twinkle in my eyes! Yes, the Moon casts love's spell once again...when will it ever end? Never, I hope!

    Loved the Olde English as well.

    I love you,
    Brazos


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    May 20, 2008
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    Some beautiful writes have been entered in this contest. I think the moon really opens up the creative mind of us writers. You did a fantastic job describing love making under the light of the moon. Great job, my sister.
    Good luck in the contest.
    Nor


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    May 20, 2008

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    MMMM...how wonderful! This is just dreamy! I am so glad I did this contest...your entry is wonderful my friend...thank you!

    Az

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