Can you hear me
I'm calling out to you
When you look at her
Don't turn away
I know it's not her you see
In fact I know it's me
I'm every where you are
I follow you
Every thing you are is
Because of me
I'm inside you
Taking control of your mind
You can't say you don't think of me
I know your every thought
And I've planned your every move
You think your free
All you need to do is block me
But what you don't know is you can't
Like I said
I know you better
Than you know your self
I'm all around you
Theres nowhere to run
I'm haunting you
A contest entry
- Anything and everything-prewrites allowed-2nd contest by Midgetbridgey.
350 points, ended July 11, 2008, 245 entries
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Comments
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oh I felt like you were inside me, taking control of me...how maginificantly written this is, well done...stonrg words
Cindy
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This kid brad, he basically took a shit on my feelings, and he calls me everynight, even though he has a girlfriend, to tell me that he thinks of me. I always tell him that im always going to be in his head. im stuck there, he can never get rid of me.
this is what it reminded me of
way to capture lots of emotion
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brad who lol my ex's name is brad
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