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[ rock edifice ]

rock edifice
seeking moon
for shadow

A contest entry

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  • Malabu
    June 3, 2008

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    lol...I have other thoughts to edifice...but ill let it lay...you were not confused...sun though not visable...and moon...both cast shadows...guess the sun wins...and the moon's is desired...great ku..glad to see it up here...
    Mal


  • Kelli Marie
    May 22, 2008

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    A well written haiku. Connects very well with the picture. Thank you for sharing in the contest. Good job.
    Kelli


  • cheaphotelsign
    May 20, 2008

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    i love what you do...this is awesome...put a big smile on my face...and a slightly somber moment in my heart's pitter-patter....excellent!