Our special place down by the lake.
We walk the path from our house to the place where grass is lush and lilac and wild roses grow.
Hand in hand with the summer night breeze rustling your skirt.
The grass a carpet of softness we walk barefoot
the moon full and bright lights our way.
We find our place under a large willow.
Slowly I pull you to me and find your lips already to accept my kiss. Lips parted and a soft breath of sigh escapes you.
I embrace you and we now are in the start of our love dance
the moon reflected in the lake and 1000 shards of light erupt as our lust starts its slow burn.
Our lips devour love offered only to you.
Finding your neck i kiss and nip across shoulders.
A small shiver as the night air caresses us.
I find the buttons of your blouse and open it slowly a kiss for each one that surrenders to my touch.
The eternity of each breathfull kiss, lingering for star time to make each move and each touch.
Our legs weaken as you and i fall to our knees.
Blouse now gone and you are exposed.
Your skin glows and you are alive with each kiss that leads to perfect erect nipples. Tongue circles and licks across feeling you heave feeling your heart beat in the rhythm of the universe.
Slowly the song of birds and frogs join in the orchestra of love that we share.
I open your skirt zipper and now i have golden paradise exposed.
Innocents lingers from our first trip to cupids garden when love was new.
I lay you down and caress you and feel your soft skin respond with each touch.
My lips travel to places of passion and pleasure, knowing all your secret places
hours pass and we fall together to final place of joy and experience.
Flying to heaven on waves of final love and pleasure.
I find a tear of joy and fulfillment in your eye my lips kiss and take it to my soul.
The moon now flying to apex and all the world around celebrating in our fulfillment of the nights wonderment and complete natural of joining.
Happy Today Beloved
A contest entry
- Under The Moon by SummerlandRayne.
643 points, ended May 30, 2008, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Comments
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Full of romance, passion and the sensual pleasure of love under the moonlit skies.
'Slowly the song of birds and frogs join in the orchestra of love that we share.' - nice touch.
best wishes in the contest.

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What a beautiful declaration of love. Your words brought such tender, romantic images to mind.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
Margaret


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So glad to read something from you. It has been far too long to be without your words. You know how to speak the words of love and sensuality. It comes so easily from your pen and from your heart. This takes my breath away as you have done to me with many of your other pieces.
Welcome back, my sweet..
Soulful Woman
Noreen

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You are such a lover under the moon! This is so sensual and so sweet...the way Mother intended love to be. Why in a world so full of hatred and despair...can we all not just love one another in such a tender and kind way? If I were to create a world my Knight...all would be as this. There would be no hatred...no sadness no one unloved and alone. How I have missed your visions of pure love. Thank you for this gift...
I do so adore it with all my heart!
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Ahh to make that walk with the one you love. Very sensual piece full of love and tendernsee. Come and walk with me my sweet.
Love your work.
Cheryl
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