In the stillness of this moment
I am drunk with exhilaration
as you lie next to me
silvery clouds whirl to rhythms
of our breath, sweet
with passion
moon glow bathes our nakedness,
bodies intertwined like
alabaster statues
rendered to honor lovers.
In a list
A contest entry
- Under The Moon by SummerlandRayne.
643 points, ended May 30, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Absolutley beautiful
statues are made to capture a moment or the beauty of a moment,and what moment is more beautiful than the cuddling afterglow of two lovers in the silver light?
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Beautiful
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Another great write from you MJ. Will bookmark this and read again. Love Juls
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Beautiful MJ... I love that last line... I could just see two lovers entwined under the glow of the moon!
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Your words are full of the most magical, romantic enchantment. I love the way you create a moment in time that wraps itself around me in a soft blanket of passion when I read your poetry.
My best wishes to you in the contest dear.
Always
Margaret
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So lovely! The Moon brings out the romantic in many of us...does She not? Thank you for a wonderful entry!
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Milk white light bathes us,
stone statues lost; a lovers sigh
a hand that strokes my fair cheek,
a touch upon my thigh,
brings breathing to my lips
and a kiss I share
as I look deep into your eyes... Love, C
lol You gotta stop writing these
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sensual
good write short but full of romance.
good luck in contest.
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What a wonderful piece you penned here.As always, great job and best of wishes in the contest.
Love
Passions
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