Take me away
To a pardise
With only you and I.
A contest entry
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300 points, ended May 20, 2008, 6 entries
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Be honest and if it sucks, say it sucks.
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wow that sucked what happend to the hole emo thig damn ur sooooo confuseing pick a theme and stick to it
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Pretty
Short and sweet. Nice. Kinda reminds me of a pocketful of sunshine.
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In those few words you have said so very much!
Love this piece!
Very meaningful!
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Rather short, but it says a lot in so few words. I'd love to see what you could do with the idea if you ever care to elaborate on it!
hiraeth. -
Nice!!!
With only a few words you were able to say something I can not even say in a thousand words...Its great -
in just a few words you managed to say one of the most important things in the world: "Ilove you"
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I love paradise!
and I agree, it gets so busy sometimes, we have to remember to ask...take me away, to a paradise, with only
you and I!
loved it!
ears/Seattle
13 words is tough, good job.
perhaps two more words of passion would have sealed
it most powerfully.
(feasting lusciously)??
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but this fits the prompt. LOL.
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