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Mozart

Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart played music that burned with desire.
His sonatas were published, and set on fire.
His talented fingers pressed against the piano keys.
Composing symphonies with emotion on his knees.
The rhapsody that was written captured everyone's heart.
From his beloved he could not part.
Accomplished on the clavichord he composed a minuet.
He performed concert tours just to stay out of debt.
The King of Prussia was a great fan.
His imperial patrons knew he was quite a man.
Amadeus wrote a requiem mass for a mysterious, but jealous stranger.
This soul in black stalked Mozart, and posed a danger.
His exhausted body shivering with pain.
The notes echoing in his brain.
No longer could he lift his head.
Upon his piano, he was pronounced dead. 

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  • Spiritual Soul
    June 3, 2008

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    Welcome to Allpoetry!

    wow this was beautiful. This flowed so well, like it was written like a symphony. You created so many images with these words, and they make you think even more about them. This was an awesome write, keep it up!
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    ~Michaela~
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  • Touchof1der silver member
    May 21, 2008

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    Your words have a way of commanding readers to stop and take notice. This painted such wonderful images within and the way my mind seemed to grasp at your words and the savory delights that fed my hungry soul made this a literary feast. From the first line I was kept intrigued. Each that followed just drew me in deeper. Thank you for sharing your words with me and best wishes to in all of your endeavors. Keep that quill dipped in ink and ever ready for use dear poet. Welcome to the wonderful world of Allpoetry. I hope that you find this to be an encouraging and helpful poetry site to explore and expand your writing ability. Let me also encourage you to take some time to wander the site and check out all that we have to offer here. And remember, if you have any questions please feel free to contact any greeter or moderator here.
    ♥ Touchof1der