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A Deep Sleep

Missing image


Sound from one ear
To the other
Howls from one valve
Comfort all
Cells within merge
Into something foreign

Self pity makes love
Into your fears
I recognize in the mirror
Hands bound I finger
My tips that dance
To the songs
Of an angels shame

Jenny dances to all
Even to the birds
Who sing the truth &
Calls beneath the cold
Embrace of lies

My palms are in the air
To be nailed, to worship
The idea of a life
But the ghosts are oh
So thankless and
Time only cries

I starve for forgiveness
For a light in this interior
I would like to carry
With your screams
To fill every inch of
My skeleton

Maybe then
I’ll be able
To embrace my bones

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  • mtpoet
    June 3, 2008
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    The death of the child in the third stanza is profound... Childhood can be taken in so many ways...


  • Maedes
    May 21, 2008
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    I starve for forgiveness also...
    thanks for sharing this poem

  • salmanz
    May 20, 2008
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    The poem is wonderful..I am awed...keep writing like this plz.

  • JWGoethe
    May 20, 2008
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    Im not sure exactly what this means, but I like the imagery, the language, and the overall emotion that it expresses. I read it through several times, and each time something else leapt out at me, which is a sign of a good write. Thought provoking and bitter, it seems to me. Well done.

  • Lonestarwolf
    May 20, 2008
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    awesome


  • wildwolf
    May 20, 2008
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    Excellent Poem

    Excellent well thought poem i liked it was from the heart and somewhat relates to me.

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