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Shadows In Moonlight






Shadows play on skin so pale
under the silvery light of the full moon
Come with me my dear  
let's play our favorite game

Skin so soft and yielding
hands warm and thrilling
cool breeze lifts strands of hair
Shadows dance on endlessly

Lay with me on the long lush grass
in the meadow where the Jasmine grows
Laugh with me in the moonlight
caressing and cuddling close

Let shadows play in the moonlight
Let shadows dance in the moonlight
Let shadows love in the moonlight
Come play dance and love.








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I love the moonlight too.

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  • aboomer silver member
    May 21, 2008

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    'Let shadows play in the moonlight
    Let shadows dance in the moonlight
    Let shadows love in the moonlight'
    I especially like that part - just romantic and such lovely images.
    best wishes in your contest.


  • Margaret Denham gold member
    May 21, 2008

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    You've painted a wonderful picture of making love beneath the moon.

    Best of luck in the contest.

    Margaret


  • patsoldcat
    May 20, 2008
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    good

    loved the shadow of love lingering for eternity in this one.
    good luck in the contest.


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    May 20, 2008

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    SIGH!!! I love this...so soft and so sweet! Like a whisper upon the breeze. Under the full moon...just touching and being so free! You made me feel with this! I love it...thank you so much...I am going to read again!