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[ waterless cacti ]

waterless cacti
shriveling in sunshine
sucking sand

A contest entry

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  • Haiku-bless-you gold member
    June 2, 2008

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    Sucking sand...great line! You capture the image well. Congrats on the Bronze trophy friend.

    Dennis


  • Kelli Marie
    May 22, 2008

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    Cactus don't need much water, if any... A nicely written haiku though. Thank you for sharing in the contest.
    Kelli


  • cheaphotelsign
    May 21, 2008

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    what a sad little picture...a poor little grouping of cacti, dying of thirst...i have several cacti and lucky for them my thumb is a hazy shade of green...whatever color poet's thumbs are supposed to be...that's what color yours is. well done.

  • fillurhands
    May 20, 2008

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    Funny

    Sad for the cacti, but I had to laugh when I read it.
    I don't have a clue about Haiku, but I know what I like. This is good. I like the short and simple.
    Good Stuff!

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