It is easier to meet you this way.
I stride forward on silent black paws,
my golden eyes capturing you.
You kneel down with open arms and
gather me to yourself, hugging my neck
and running your fingers through the
ruff of my shoulders. I wag my tail and whine,
I've missed you.
But we don't have much time, human boy.
I shake your hands free, stepping back.
Your eyes burn in anticipation.
I concentrate and slowly you see:
paws change to delicate hands
my tail shrinks into pale hips
lupine bulk turns to feminine waist
and finally my face emerges,
brown locks falling over eyes turned hazel.
Your gasp tells me I've finished transforming,
the woman under the she-wolf.
Now I am fragile and you are in charge,
surging forward to grab me and carry me to the
blanket you laid out on the cool summer grass.
It is my turn to burn in anticipation:
your hands running up my thighs
fingers grazing my breasts, tracing the line
of my jaw,
mouth leaving kisses on every inch of
moon-bathed skin.
I squirm under your ministrations,
my hips lifting,
back arching,
arms reaching for you frantically
as my breath turns to whimpers:
I cannot wait any longer.
You just smile and lock eyes with me,
lowering down down down
slowly slowly slowly
until I can no longer stand it and
pull you in, the she-wolf violent
in her impatience.
I growl, you laugh.
You push, I gasp.
I lift, you groan.
We surge together, end together with a shout and a yip.
My eyes are half gold as I kiss you.
A contest entry
- Under The Moon by azlyn.
643 points, ended May 30, 2008, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
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This is a beautiful piece, and I can't think of any other way to describe it without sounding stupidly repetitive. I look forward to reading more on this line.
Cheryl
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Cool
This was a fun read and I loved the premise. That last line really got me, too.
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wow
nice write imagitive and romantic.
good luck in contest.
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WOW
This was great! Pulled me right in and kept me there until the ending! Great images and emotions!
Well done!
best wishes in the contest.
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Oh my goodness!!! I freakin loved that so much!!! I felt like I was watching one of the movies I love so much! Your imagery was magnificent...perfect in fact! Thank you so very much...that was a treat for me...eye candy! I am ready to HOWL!!!
Az -
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Thank you.
On storywrite I'm working on a piece with a female werewolf as the protagonist. This is how I imagine she and her boyfriend might meet up sometime, so it wasn't hard at all to write. Thanks for making such an awesome contest!
-Niur Tarow
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