hide-and-seek
the early moon
snags- the sun
My Haiku Poetry
Author notes
Visual inspiration;
http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2406/23.jpg?1211326687
modern haiku
In a list
A contest entry
- Haiku II by Kelli Marie.
1350 points, ended June 2, 2008, 17 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Congrats. I would have been quite surprised if this hadn't won.
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so cute!
wonderful creativity!! gold is most deserved
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This is wonderful. The only thing, and it is a personal preference, is the & sign. Still, an awesome haiku. Thank you for sharing in the contest.
Kelli -
Very interesting way of writing a haiku -- Ah I see a modern haiku -- Well I'd say very modern
I like it though. It's different, and your words actually say something rather interesting... It makes you think.
Nice haiku 
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Very well done. You really work wonders with Haiku pieces.
Goes fantastic with the picture prompt.
Good luck in the contest.
Soulful Woman
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Nice playful image. You are the master.
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