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Love Me Gusty

Love me Gusty
Hold onto me too
I swear that I won’t
Be afraid of you
I can handle your past
Your love and your pain
It never occurred
That I could love again

Love me Gusty
Be my black knight
Come christen me now
With your heavenly light
I know for a fact
No evil’s in your eyes
It’s you who I want
But it’s who you despise

Love me Gusty
Just that small simple thing
You know I won’t stop
Till I’m under your wing
Your heart’s what I’m after
Oh please love me back
Can’t you understand?
My heart’s under attack

Why don’t you love me?
I simply can’t see
What they all had
What I lack completely
I care for you more
Than them all combined
Can’t we walk away?
Our fingers entwined

Gusty I love you
Would you give me a chance?
Would you stop for a moment?
Just spare more than a glance?
My soul is laid out
For you to just take
My heart can be yours
To keep or to break

It could possibly work out
Could we give it a shot?
I love you for you
You’re more than just hot
Not a demon or the devil
You’re my Angel at best
I think that just maybe
I could pass your test

Simply love me Gusty
It’s what I want in return
Give me what I crave
For the love that I yearn
An old romance is ending
I’m completely undone
I need you in the end
You’re my brightly lit sun

Gusty, what can I say
To make you come near
I long for your warmth
Please silence my fear
I need your sweet touch
I could break in the end
Johnny I love you
Just more than a friend




Author notes

I know I'm gonna get yelled at for those who know who he is, but math is boring so I came up with this. Don't yell, or scream, or anything, just look at the words and see how I view him, through my eyes, ok? *That means YOU Abby* ._.

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  • Lexie
    May 20, 2008

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    this was a long poem, but very worth reading. i liked you rhyming technique. and the way it flowed. very romantic.


  • Little Miss Mental
    May 20, 2008
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    I's actually quite happy at how this turned out, I never really like what I write, but for once...I love something.