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You!

A scream; a yell,
Anger so cold,
it kills.
I want you,
the one
that hurts me
to rot in hell.
You make me feel
like I'm dying
while I'm crying
for you.

A kick; a screech
from me.
There is nothing
for me.
I want you
down on your knees
begging me forgiveness.
I hate you
more then anything.

A tear; a fake smile
that is what you mean to me.
You make me sick.
Now lay me down
to sleep,
where I can keep
my peace.
You, you...
I want you dead!

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I think it speaks for itself...

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  • notallowedtocry
    May 21, 2008

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    Really good peom here, such emotion and insensity. Harsh and real, like your telling that person. What's your all poetry name? XxX