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A Pause

A pause
in all things,
whether it be
two breaths,
a whisper,
the thunder and lightening,
or the murmurs of love.

a pause...

in all things
death and rebirth,

a pause...

awareness of the peace
a pause brings.

Erigeneia © 2008

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  • Crescitvirtus
    June 26

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    Effective repetition of the words 'a pause'. I am not sure that I entirely 'got' this one, save I identify with the closing sentiments (you are really good at 'closing sentiments' E/ although I would go further: a pause can not only bring peace to life's general busy-ness, it can also bring wisdom.

    May not have 'got' it, but liked it neverthless. Bravo

  • Thoughts-of-Soloman gold member
    May 20

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    Your title attracted me...
    and I am not disappointed by opening this at all. In fact it simply surpasses any expectation which I may have had.
    So simple and easy to receive this invitation, which yet points to an 'opening' into magnificence and largeness of Peace.

    A wonderful 'write' of true quality. Sol

    • Erigeneia gold member
      May 20
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      Shhh...can you hear it?

      A pause, in all things, "pointing to an opening into magnificence and largeness of Peace". It is a shame more do not take the time to enjoy the silence.

      Thank you Sol, for a wonderful reply.

      ~E.