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Christmas Wish

In the quiet where the wind lies down
and starlight illuminates every home,
people dream of love and peace

as they sleep together alone.

Through cracks each person has within,
where love has managed to drain away
leaving loneliness in its wake,

like Santa Clause he enters in,
fills the space with spiritual gifts.

In the morning when they awake,
each person who had suffered empty hearts,
find themselves filled with God's grace

and realize they are not alone.
This is his promise to you.

From Christmas on throughout the year,
may you all be blessed with this:
to know the love of God's kiss
and never feel alone again.

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Written December 23rd, 2003

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  • smileywinks
    December 24, 2003
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    Closed now for judging, I really love this write! And thank you for entering
    XOXO Veronica


  • Ladybug
    December 23, 2003
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    Amen, and may all our days be filled in grace and mercy
    for peace in all we really need...
    this is beautiful Joyce,
    you are the winner to have this geniune heart!

    Tamara


  • NurseChilly gold member
    December 23, 2003
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    Joyce.. this is a WINNER in my eyes hun.. exactly what it's all about my friend.. good luck with this contest and a Merry Christmas to you and yours..
    ~GILL~xxxxx