and there in her hands
it lies.:
beautiful
broken pieces
shattered glass.
it used to be her heart
until you threw it down
onto the cold marble floor.
Author notes
I'm not sure if this is what you were looking for, but it is what I saw in the picture (which was very cool by the way! .
A contest entry
- Pic prompt semi quickie.... it's me again !!! by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended May 20, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think!!!
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This is really sweet and moving. I liked the way you use the imagery and metaphor throughout. Deceptively simple but very well crafted. I did like this. Thanks for sharing and well done on your HM. Cheers.
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HM buddy! I entered her contest and got an HM too I really like this, it is short and yet filled with feeling. Great job!
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Yay HM buddies
I want to go read your poem for this contest now!
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this is really good sis
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Aww so sad!! It definitely relates to the pic as it incorporates the look of glass and the coldness this pic gives!! Great take, thank you!
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