I miss you
I miss all of the good times that we had
I miss going to bed
Thinking that
No one could ever hurt me
Because you were there
I miss sitting on the grass
In the summer
Talking and laughing all day long
I miss you walking me home
That hug that made me confident
I miss sitting down
Watching you skateboard with your friends
I miss dancing with you
I miss you holding me close
I miss kissing your lips
I miss you
WHAT DO YOU THINK?????
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Welcome to Allpoetry
This is really sweet, in a sad way of course.
There are times when we are really happy and we just don't realise what we miss until it is gone. This is one of those poems, it would seem.
I suggest that you don't start every line with "I"
Try just carrying the sentence on..
"I miss dancing with you and
you holding me close, so
I could kiss your lips."
Also punctuation is great when you want people to stop and think about something that you said. Commas and full stops are great.
Anyways, welcome to the site, enjoy
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Faerie
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