You asked me what the thing I would die for was
I said I didn't know
Answers ran fleetingly through me head
Like a rock caught in a river's flow
I saw you every day at school
We were the best of friends
We were together all the time
I thought there would be no ends
One summer evening it was just you and me
Your question had been on my mind
I opened my mouth to give you my answer
How could I have been so blind
But out of the corner of my eye I saw
Him crouching behind the fence
I saw the knife glinting in his hand
My fear was so intense
I tried to run but all I could think
Was not him, please not Jase
With tears sparkling in my eyes I smiled at him
As the horror dawned on his face
He saw his answer in my eyes
He was my only one
How could I leave him behind
I closed my eyes preparing for death, my life was coming undone
The man jumped from the side
And sprang at him
No was all I thought
I lunged for him crying out, my chances looked so slim
I made it to Jase just in time
The knife sliding into my back
The answer to my tears was in his eyes
Then everything went black
I answered is question with more than words
I hope he escaped the knife
I gave myself to give him time
My answer was his life
Author notes
CJ Poet Laureate
A contest entry
- Semi Quickie Tears Are Words That The Heart Can't Say by Folklor.
525 points, ended May 21, 2008, 12 entries
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Comments
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a great story and a heart gripping ending. I like the way you made the prompt very subtle and building it up. 'But out of the corner of my eye I saw
Him crouching behind the fence
I saw the knife glinting in his hand
My fear was so intense' this was a really good part of the story where the tension began to build up
well done a really interesting interpretation
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good story.
to give ones life for another is the best gift one can give, it reminds me of someone who gave his life for me. i liked "my answer was his life."


