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Senior Citizen Xmas Senryu

florida Christmas
lots of fun in warm sun
miss the snow,NO.

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Written December 23rd, 2003

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  • smileywinks
    December 24, 2003
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    Thank you for entering, Just finishing up reading these now LOL
    Merry Xmas and Happy new year! Good Luck Veronica


  • Sherry gold member
    December 23, 2003
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    Nice piece Gramps Merry Christmas we have some pretty white snow falling tonight now I don't know if we will have a white christmas but its pretty watching it from the window tonight Hugs,Sherry


  • December 23, 2003
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    I love to watch it snow. As for being out in it, NOT! Nice work Bill.