Time is the enemy,
Obscure thoughts lay on the horizon.
Raider, you have stolen my heart.
Taintless love abounds.
Undeniable longing, to be in your arms.
Rainy nights, replace rainy days.
Everything is new.
Doubts begin to stir, within the darkened chasm.
A contest entry
- Up Down by Darkwell.
800 points, ended July 27, 2008, 32 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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this has wonderful twists between pure love an question
Taintless love abounds.
Doubts begin to stir
i love the fight between love an uncertainty in this piece. lovely
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WTG! Good luck in the contest
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