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~ Fractured ~ { Gold }

Topaz heart shattered,

Splinters shards cut,

Raw minerals unpolished,

Chilled the hands that grasp,

Cobwebs of memories,

Failing love,

once-more.

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{ Make me Feel }

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  • carole21
    September 22

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    nicely penned . . liked "Chilled the hands that grasp" and "Cobwebs of memories" . . congrats on the gold


  • Abe 1
    June 3

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    amazed me what a poem and a half
    u sure do produce ace writes
    looked at de image and wow wow wow
    well done on de gold
    abe

  • celadia
    May 30
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    Congrats on gold, this is a worthy poem.

  • mistiman
    May 25
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    Ouch! such painful images julie yet superbly succint as ever. You write with a pen of gold.

  • Weltt silver member
    May 20
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    I knew this would grab gold. well done and congratulations!!!


  • perfectsunset
    May 20
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    This was a beautiful take on the prompt.. congrats on the gold

  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 20

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    I'm trying to pick a part I like the most... but I can't, I love each line, drew me in... excellent take on the pic!


  • aboomer silver member
    May 20

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    Lovely image filled with harsh realities for many. I love the 'topaz heart shattered' and the 'cobwebs of memories'....
    nicely done
    best wishes in your contest.


  • Carolina Moon silver member
    May 20

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    I knew you would pen something fantastic!! And you surely did!..Beautifully done dear

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