As she lies
Upon the floor
She stares at him
Coming through the door
He had hit her
So very hard
He had always treated her
As a retard
As she lay there thinking
'What could he do next?'
He as drunk
So very perplexed
He acted as if he didn't know
What had happened a while ago
That's when she realized the pain
She would soon forego
That's when she asked herself
'Why did I mary this man?'
He such a monster
He might as well shove me in a tin can
Why does abuse happen
Why did it happen to this woman?
She should get some help
She should find herself a real man
Author notes
This is my first angst poem, so it isn't that great.
Written December 23rd, 2003
A contest entry
- anger, depression, rejection...along those lines by .
350 points, ended March 11, 2004, 18 entries
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What did you think
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Nice, boy, very nice! I wouldn't expect you to write about this kinda thing, but here it is... who woulda thought?
keep up the good work!
~Keesy!~ -
This one really makes the eyes swell with tears~Beautifully written and abuse happens more than we know~Great write my dear and keep on writing and evoking emotion~Thank you for sharing~Look forward to more~Best wishes to you in the contest~Big hugs 
and much love~Desire
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its good, i like it and thats all that matters...even though i dont know u....but hey who cares...lol nice poem
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