Waiting on a shelf
for a kid to pick me
My pink nose
and cat ears
with my little eyes twikling
As the kids walk by a
girl looks at me
She smiles,
then ask her mom
if she could buy me!
She picks me up and
hugs me tight,
and my stuffing stays right
Author notes
i'm not sure about the last line....
My animal is a stuffed Cat!
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A contest entry
- Kids 13 & Under ♥ Stuffed Animals♥ by Rianna Bear.
525 points, ended June 12, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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no, it makes sense to me. with how hard she hugs you, you are still in one piece and your "stuffing stays right" in its place! this was adorable! thanks so much for sharing and for your entry!
♥rianna
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I love it more like everybodeys
And also you had to put a . at the end : )
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I don't know 'bout the last line neither.Maybe it means the cat thing is glad that some one finally picked her!I dunno.
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This is good! I like it
Very sweet, it's like the tale of how your stuffed cat and you met
Though I'm not sure what the last line means, if you just threw it in trying to go for the rhyme, then I wouldn't worry about the rhyme since you didn't rhyme in the other stanzas.
But overall a nice, sweet poem good luck in the contest.
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