If you'd dare
You'd come with me
Exploring places
Most don't go
The air's stiff
Perhaps musky
Smell the dead
And new born here
The place only you can come
Up here in my mind
Author notes
well i hope you like it!
A contest entry
- Where would you take me by patsoldcat.
600 points, ended June 2, 2008, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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final edet
good and moving. thanks for entering, hope you enjoyed it.
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thank you!
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first edit
thanks for the entry
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