The affection toward the opposition of being all for something or
someone. Utterly obsessed with the termination of anything and
everything, including one's own existence. Negatively judging any
event or participant, not to mention any unlucky bystander or witness.
Love would be regarded as the plague and the act of liking punishable
by love. Not being able to withstand the thought of perceiving;
sensibilities shut down so as to not feel.
I'm talking about HATRED.
The likes of which would describe the ultimate in its platform.
Darkness. The only solution to be. Would existence exist?
I see hate as it should be, banned and caged to its own. The only
reason for it to exist is to counteract love at the same pinnacle.
To write about hate in a more descriptive light would be to emerge
from its complete depths and realize its different forms.
The varieties would make vast lists.
Biases that turn into hatred for one thing or another, dislikes
perceived as hate, fear for something that transforms into hate as a
defense mechanism, or just hate as a feeling to coincide with the
people with which one associates with, anyone of these bases for
hatred would root out of an ultimate darkness where actual hate
arises from.
Poetically speaking, nothing is worth noting,
except the triumph of love over any form of hate.
A contest entry
- Drop what your doing and write what you are thinking by HereComesTheSun.
450 points, ended May 25, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Hate by ApathysEnemy.
650 points, ended November 22, 2008, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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im not really sure that this is exactly hate. what I was wanting for my contest was why you hate something, not necessarily what hate is. It has amazing imagry and good style but i don't know if it was necessarily what i was looking for
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this is really nice,
it sort of speaks to you,
about what anger and hatred is,
i love this so much,
my faveourite bit is this:
Biases that turn into hatred for one thing or another, dislikes
perceived as hate, fear for something that transforms into hate as a
defense mechanism, or just hate as a feeling to coincide with the
people with which one associates with, anyone of these bases for
hatred would root out of an ultimate darkness where actual hate
arises from.
it speaks to me in a way,
all my love,
kitty -
as araya jabari said brillent great job fantastic read
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brilliant. This something Pingwin would write (thats a good thing) I adore the way you expressed hate and love.
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Wow- way to load in the genuis thoughts and emotions. Wonderful, you really should think about publishing some of your profound thoughts. They are rather intruging.
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Ok.. I feell like a 5 year old compared to you!!!..lol.This was really good hun.. You really know how to dig deep and express yourself.. I really lobed this.. and thats all I'm going to say...lol.
Best of luck..
Angel
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