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Pandora's Box

PANDORA’S BOX

Many a wise tongue has clucked
at poor Pandora's sin:
how much more foolish is the tongue
who, having clucked,
repeats the crime - like mine.

You've opened up again
haven't you?
Let the safe shield slip an inch.
You should have snapped
hard fast the lock,
and, unlike Pandora,
sat upon the lid.

Haven't you learned yet
that the slipper you carry
will never fit?
that there is no
girl among the cinders
waiting for you?

Didn't you spread your cards
along the table
one last time?
Risk one final toss of dice?
Fool!
Fortune will never smile on you,
since Luck's a lady
and ladies don't love you.


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  • deercatcher
    June 19, 2008
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    The man that believes he can
    And the man that believes he can't





    Are both right.


  • Blooming Poet
    June 12, 2008

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    I really admire the creativity that went into this poem. A lot of broken heart poems lack that creative feel. Great work.