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Christmas Present (Part III)

They lay in bed
just staring at each other
naked bodies next to each other
they can't resist each other

She climbs on top of him
as he places himself in her
thrusting together
in perfect rhythm

She grabs his ass
to force him in and out
he massages and licks
her hard nipples

25 minutes
of the best sex ever
"Merry Christmas" they both said
and then calmly and happily fell asleep

Author notes

I don't really like the ending, but oh well...
Written December 23rd, 2003

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  • Twisteddolly
    December 23, 2003
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    awwww this was a very sweet edning....great write! especially for your first you said?? very nice...keep writing..!!

    ~Jessica~