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Christmas Present (Part II)

He took off her slip
then slowly and painfully
moved his hands
down her body

He began to lick and suck her nipples
while his hand went to work
moving in and out of her pussy
a foretaste of the feast to come

he licked his way
down below
he slipped his tongue in
and began twisting and turning

And then she came

They looked into each others eyes
for what seemed like an eternity
She wispered "I love you"
He said, "I love you more"

to be continued...

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woah... haha, I think I might be getting the hang of this... what do you think?
Written December 23rd, 2003

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