The Doctor invited me on a trip,
Whilst he went out with Rose,
I chose to take Dawn with me,
But she wanted to go somewhere else.
I wanted to go to the planet Messaline,
To go and have a look,
We went to Messaline,
And I was processed.
Now I have a son,
Who doesn't leave my side,
He can be quite annoying,
But he never gets bored.
Author notes
By Maximum
A contest entry
- Tardis Time by Dreamana.
450 points, ended May 29, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What are the good points and bad points. How can I improve.
Comments
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This is such a beatiful poem about our favorite time lord. p.s. who is your fav timelord?
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Nice!
Good job on this poem, Maximum! I hope to read more great poems from you!
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Boredom! The enemy of all kids.
As for going out with Rose, can't I take her instead.. please
Thank you for entering.
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