In this pool of water
Tainted with her blood
I see the reflection
Of my deepest fears.
For I have killed her,
And now I, too, will
Pay the price.
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Dark, yet good
This is really...good. A bit dark, but also hauntingly beautiful. Good work Nekko-chan. By the way? I miss you. Hope you come around again soon.
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Welcome to Allpoetry
This is deep. Very effective for something so strong. It leaves many impressions and questions as to whether or not what you believe it may be is actually real.
Excellent metaphor and use of punctuation.
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Thank you. (:
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Very Good
I don't normal read the dark stuff. I find that people are usually too overdramatic and butcher the effort. The two line caption drew me in. I liked it. From my ancient memory banks, it reminds me of something Poe would write. Super Job!
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Thank you!!
I find that people usually butcher poetry and such as well.. This comment made me very happy.. I didn't even think it would be considered something that Poe himself would write!! Thank you so much for the comment, I'm studying poetry.. but I seem to have had a knack for it for quite some time. But anyway.. thank you once again!! Your comment is appreciated!
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