there's a person that love left out
no one know him or what he's about
he goes around town all sad and depressed
feeling nothing but sorrow and loneliness
his friends are all gone, missing without a trace
left him with memories he cannot erase
his family is hurting, no time for a smile
even though he needs it every once in a while
he hangs his head low wanting to escape
wishing, hoping someone could relate
but everywhere he goes there's a hug and a kiss
he turns away quickly from their memorable bliss
he now lays in his grave with no flowers or wreaths
there's no one to say goodbye or give him some grief
and why would they? no one wants to go that route
to remember the one that love left out
A contest entry
- Lost Love and the Emo kids behind it by kenjii.
332 points, ended May 27, 23 entries
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Comments
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Excellent Poem
You are really good, your rhyming was excellent. I think the background you chose fits the poem perfectly.
Well done
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it was good...
You made a piece that was an excellent trip/explanation of an Emo life, (so to speak)...
I especially liked how he turns away from the love he is shown... It was like a slap in the face, (once again, so to speak...) At the same time though, it wasn't what I was looking for... sorry.
It was a good piece though! be proud of it!
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